Nowadays many teenagers choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
The startup culture is gaining momentum across the globe among teenagers. While internet revolution is a strong driver for this trend it is also reflects the changing attitude to be empowered. This essay will discuss aforementioned points along with the increased stress disrupting the work life balance and also the low probability of success with relevant examples.
There is ample evidence that greater number of youngsters are sacrificing a comparatively comfortable job to start their own ventures. The central reason for this is the idea of working for oneself rather than for others is liberating to youth. In addition to this, the income could be scalable and not fixed. The effort to reward ratio is much higher as compared to salaried jobs. For instance, an employee of an organization has a fixed income coming from a job throughout the year as compared to a business where it is dependent on demand and sales of product or a service which is proportional to the success of the company. Thus it is possible to state that attractive monetary benefits coupled with dynamic environment are detrimental for adolescents to float their own firms.
Although there is case for increased income by having one’s own business, the stress associated of making it into a profitable venture by sacrificing personal life cannot be understated. Right from its inception to end, the owner has to be involved and foresee all the operations regardless the timing. Furthermore, risk of it crashing and going bankrupt is higher in this competitive market. To illustrate this, an Oxford University study states that around 10000 companies file for bankruptcy every year in the USA and a success rate of startups at 20%. Therefore it is conclusively clear that besides the pressure involved, it is not easy to sustain and get consistent returns.
To conclude, in spite of having a distorted personal life and possibility of going broke, the emotional and potential returns lure the youngsters to discard a job and be self-employed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12386706949 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93520663245 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.436558672 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233920220022 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070049493192 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696432815298 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131994706078 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016391838743 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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