Nowadays men and women decided to have children in their lives. Why is this occurring? What are the impacts of this development on society and family?
These days many young individuals are deciding to have children in their later stage of life, and both male and female equally respect each others decision. Personally, I believe that today’s generation is prioritizing their future goals, instead of having babies in the first place. This essay will discuss the reasons in detail and will also substantiate how it is affecting other members.
To begin with, the predominant reason is that people are now more concerned about their own settlements, so that they could provide a comfortable life for their children. This is why most of the men and women tend to marry around in their 30s, which gives them sufficient time for themselves. As a result, after having a stable career they plan to have babies, when they can fully support the needs of their children. For example, according to a research, it has been shown that parents who do not properly plan things for their babies are more likely to get deprived of the basic necessities like, not having enough toys and good education. Thus, individuals are considering all the factors before having a baby.
Nevertheless, this practice has its own drawbacks. First of all, there are more chances to see fewer children in the near future, and a high surge in an ageing society. This will create a huge generation gap and will negatively affect society. Secondly, in the majority of the families, old age people are always want to see their grandchildren’s. Adding to this, maybe this will create a void in families and which will only be fulfilled after the arrival of a child.
In conclusion, after discussing in detail I opine by saying that, parents want to give a secure life to their children and which requires time. As a consequence, they end up deciding to have children in later phases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... are more likely to get deprived of the basic necessities like, not having enough toys and good e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90879478827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68371096315 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5166111329 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282391048893 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899186566129 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475750695261 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161915196844 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308416182775 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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