These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern world, technology is playing a significant role by benefiting human beings in every possible way. Internet and cell phones are the forms of technological advancements, and are providing maximum advantages to the masses. The merits of this development outnumbered its demerits, which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are myriads of methods that are used by people while connecting with their near and dear ones. Primarily, the use of mobile phones for communication that is for nationally and internationally, and on top of that availability of low calling rates via using the internet. As a result, the majority of individuals are able to afford calling to their kith and kins, who are sitting in foreign countries. For example, by using applications such as WhatsApp, Skype and Instagram one can connect with others through video as well voice calling whenever they want.
Secondarily, this development is helping individuals and providing them a wide range of information around the world. In this way, they are more likely to connect with the outer world by knowing more about them. To exemplify, these days most of the society is reading newspapers on their mobile phones.
The Sinister side, it is generally believed that the excess usage of phones and the Internet is harmful for the generation. As it leads to various health problems that having poor eyesight is one of them. In addition, it also increases the sedentary lifestyle of a person, leaving no time for the other physical activities.
In conclusion, undeniably there are some drawbacks but the positive has outweighed them. Also, the individuals should manage their time schedule, while using these technologies and should utilise them for more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28014184397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92717340581 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3597117297 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188232657197 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583484205248 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376116037937 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948897343847 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478740060285 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.