Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
Over the last couple of years, people are leading a sedentary lifestyle due to various reasons. This essay will state the reasons for inactive lifestyle wand few possible solutions to change the lifestyle.
On the one hand there is ample evidence that depicts that people are leading a deskbound and inactive life. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, we all are living in a competitive world. Due to the competition, people have less time for their wellbeing as they have to extend their working hours and work on weekends. Secondly, due to the hectic work schedule people do not have luxury of time to cook their own healthy food and instead rely on fast food or ready to cook food which are unhealthy in nature. Similarly, youngster are glued to television or video games and do not indulge in a sport or any outdoor activities which makes them sharp and active. To illustrate, a recent empirical research by Oxford University demonstrates that around 30% of youngsters globally suffer from obesity as they like to spend their time playing indoors. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that people today are leading an inactive lifestyle due to work schedule and because of easy availability of unhealthy food.
In order to mitigate the above situation, there are few possible solutions that can help people to change their lifestyle. Corporates can offer gymnasium facility to their employees in their office premises or offer discount coupons of nearby health clubs. Similarly, government in association with famous artists can drive several campaigns showcasing the benefits of healthy eating and leading an active life. For example, Indian Prime Minister Mr. Narendra Modi in spite of his busy schedule performs yoga for an hour daily and shares his videos with citizens to motivate them. To illustrate further, an extensive study by Oxford University showed that over 50% of people actively participate in campaigns that are addressed by famous artists. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that initiatives and public awareness will help in changing the behaviour of people.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that by creating awareness and showcasing the benefits of leading a fit and healthy lifestyle will make people change their attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17426273458 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6368542722 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549597855228 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3093810822 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974136770049 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343136696422 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217564091114 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632472966659 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137580425678 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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