Parental affection is an intrinsic property, kneaded into the subconscious of a human being by nature and is getting inherited ever since. With turning circumstances, over a period of centuries, this behaviour took many shapes and expressions. In the current contemporary world, with exponential growth in population, intraprofessional competition has reached a new hype. Therefore, in this era of dwindling progress opportunities, becoming successful is as difficult as it is crucial and has consequently elevated parental concerns apropos of their child’s future. In the lines to come, I will discuss prime factors creating such distress and give some relative examples from the perspective of both the parents and the child.
On one hand, parents are facing much greater challenges, in terms of their offspring’s future prospects, as compared to their predecessors. Primarily, children are like fresh concrete, ready to be cast in the moulds prepared by their parents. But, the level of effort expected from them these days have deepened the molds and they have to increase the volume of effort to fill up to the brim. For instance, students obtaining passing marks in exams were considered eligible for many public and private jobs in the past. On the contrary, many students are refused admission nowadays in spite of obtaining 96% marks due to the merit list closing at 96.5%.
On the other hand, extreme pressure from parents have made their children depressed; the fun has abated their lives and their creativity has been affected drastically. Firstly, focus on studies and studies alone has restricted their sight from many adscititious activities ready to be explored. For instance, as many have debated, extracurricular activities enhance the cognitive abilities of a child and keep him from boredom and anxiety. A silent child, musing at some fixed spot is quintessentially a paradigm of a current contemporary juvenile.
In conclusion, I reckon, maintaining balance in life is of paramount importance, as gravitating towards a specific side can have adverse effects. Moreover, better judgement system should replace the current scoring methods, to evaluate every child individually rather than the comparison. This can actually relieve the burden from the parents’ shoulders as well as provide ample time to the young learner to flourish in other fields as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45698924731 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10505166146 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4373197802 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.411764706 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175011331854 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481805342477 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474279867552 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952184873713 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263530097798 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.