Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?
provide relevant examples from your own experience
With the advancement in technology the world has gone digital now. This revolution has not only changed the way people used to listen the music and watch movies but also eased it accessibility for them. In my opinion this is surely a positive outcome.
Firstly, due to digitalization and free of cost content, this industry’s socio-commercial advantage is revealed for economists. For this reason, the public has turned their attention to digital media instead of conventional earlier. As a result, many startups have got shot in the arm to grow their business exponentially in limited period. Furthermore, due to rise in this industry it opened doors for unemployed people, during this period companies like Netflix, forged a strong foundation for this business domain. Consequently, due to digitalization of music and film industry its significant potential got revealed for gross domestic product (GDP) globally.
Secondly, society has enjoyed access to this nil cost media from any geographical co-ordinate of globe. In other words, an American citizen can now access videos, movies and songs articulated in India, with the help of YouTube. Moreover, any immigrant to new land can access entertainment content from his own country without even paying for that with no time restriction.
Finally, ability to segregate digital media based on need and content has eased job of family leader. This means, although, the films and songs are free they also need to be monitored for different age groups. Children, for instance may not get access to explore content that they are not supposed to access. As per Bloomberg survey for digital media users it showed after parental control over accessibility total digital media users has plunged by 30 Percent.
In conclusion, unlike early 90’s, free online availability of songs and films helped people to access them from any corner of globe. Though the content is free, it employs millions of people with satisfactory wage. I think this media is evidently beneficial for society and can result in further social development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31722054381 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90438408617 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604229607251 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7900597235 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205744446768 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677224339037 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416873407561 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125017199387 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039091635601 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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