In today's rapidly changing globalized world, interference of machines and devices in household works has become one of the pressing issue. From past couple of decades tremendously increasing usage of machines has created a significant changes in our daily lives. In this essay will be discussing about the advantages and disadvantages of the interference of the equipment and technologies in our daily chores.
Firstly, it is fair to say that due to industrialization of society the usage of technology has tremendously increased. From kitchen work to the gym, our lives are vitally dependent on these machines and devices. Till few decades back ladies were doing everything on their own. For instance, making floor, grinding, cutting, chopping, washing clothes. People were really doing really hard work just to eat food and finishing other chores. In addition to above, due to advancement of society and discovery of machines, we can finish any house work within no time. People can save their time and use that in other productive work.
However, technology has made our lives very easy and comfortable still myriad of of drawbacks are there. In olden time when people were doing house chores by their hands, it used to make them healthy and fit. Even though it required too much physical strength but after that ladies were physically fit. Now a days, nevertheless, the life is easy and comfortable due to the machines but after the comfort people are going for gym to achieve good health.
In the conclusion, I firmly believe, that no matter what these machines and devices has made our lives easy in many ways. Therefore it is responsibility of each individual to what extend we should use it and how to manage the situation before it become more intactable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06825938567 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81144989042 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8892900591 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182843918207 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053416291201 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437171190311 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102911000203 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00807687165275 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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