Nowadays some workplaces tend to hire or employ equal numbers of men and women workers Do you think it is a negative or positive development

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Nowadays some workplaces tend to hire or employ equal numbers of men and women workers.

Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

The recruitment process has shown a drastic change in recent years, as many employers have started hiring both men and women equally with almost the same pay scale without any wage differentiation on the basis of gender. I personally believe this as a worthwhile development because of many reasons. The main reason for such an arrangement at some workplaces is to promote women empowerment by giving equal status to them throughout the world as men. Moreover, gender equality at work gives a sense of security to every woman working for a particular organization following such a path of social deve...

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Average: 6.8 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
...ting any hiring procedure and should be part of every company's protocol. As a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00310559006 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84417120195 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4725459534 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16452905685 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569647745802 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482899063183 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992520632117 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540652060251 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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