Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples
In modern world, some people argue that the university diploma is considered as the key of brightness future with better paid job while others think that the university diploma my not guarantee for success by taking into consideration on the background of some celebrities who don’t complete their study. I partially agree with the importance of education for achieving success. This essay will discuss first why does education is important in some cases and secondly other factors for success such as skills or hobbies.
X generation parents have grown up their children with the idea that reputable university degree opens every door in business life and provides juniors unstoppable career path. People who have get their accreditation have a good change to join mega companies with a fruitful future. Some specific certificated are required to apply some mega companies’ job announcement so some people think that more certificate ensures more chance for working in mega companies. For example, mega companies such as Microsoft, Apple ask for a specifies certification in their job announcements and only those certificated are eligible to apply for.
On the other hand, there a many celebrities who didn’t complete their study. This shows us diplomas and certificates don’t mean that you will get succeed. For example, the famous business leader, Bill Gates was more interested in pursuing his own coding during his academic life and he decided that he dropped out of Harvard without finishing his course. The secret of his success is related to his ambition and determination. Another example is coming from football industry. A famous footballer, M. Sallah playing in Liverpool did not complete his high education. He is so popular because he gave an effort to develop his hobby.
In conclusion, although university education is seemed as the necessity for successful life, some examples from real life signalizes the possibility of other factors such as hobbies,skills,personal characteristics to achieve success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44025157233 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12377502592 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2651624269 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200716330166 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634288232843 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517385999951 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12646582938 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481805245269 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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