Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In 21st century, everyone is running behind money without worrying about environment. As nations are growing and technologies are developing, people are generating as much as waste they can. This essay will discuss the reasons behind production of waste in higher quantities and steps which government can take to decrease the amount of rubbish.
There are several reasons which are leading to more waste. One of them is industrialization as many industries are establishing across the nations. These growing companies are manufacturing products to meet their demand without analyzing the material and process. For example, Niagara Bottling, a US based company is using plastics in water bottles which cannot be recycled and need to be thrown away after single use. Another reason is lack of policies and strict implementation of laws. To illustrate, China has banned the use of plastic bags across the country. But still, local retailers and supermarkets are not using paper bags. Consumption of plastic bags add a lot of waste to environment. Hence, a greater number of industries and loopholes in existing policies around the nations are generating huge waste.
Nevertheless, there are many measurements which can espouse government to reduce waste disposal. Firstly, government can provide tax benefits to employers and local people if they use biodegrade materials or produce less waste on annual basis. Another step which government can take is to work on existing policies and improve current system to execute. Government can restructure the policy to ban plastic products by increasing penalty or fines. For instance, many nations have audit department to visit local shopkeepers and closed markets. If they find any retailers who is not using cloth or paper bags, then they file a complaint against them and put them behind the bars. Overall, government need to be strict in implementing legislation for plastic products and provide some benefits to curtail waste.
In conclusion, growth of industries and lack of strict laws are two main reasons which are increasing waste in the eco-system. If government follow the recommended remedies then production of rubbish can be reduced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38550724638 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90324836721 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544927536232 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8376486095 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4761904762 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121247230069 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373103117029 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416335508174 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815213213431 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277839956297 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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