ome people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The advent of the internet has had the most significant influence on humans' lives among all the fascinating inventions throughout history. Many people believe that the information provided by the internet is essential in today's civilizations, while others think that it is more harmful than beneficial in many cases. In my perspective, the internet has had many positive effects on people for the following reasons.
First of all, the internet's contributions to the promotion of science in various fields of study are undeniable. Today, thanks to the internet, elites can share their achievements with scientists all around the world and take advantage of other's findings conveniently and efficiently. For example, a psychology student can search through all the papers and researches related to his specific field of study. Therefore, by comparing the results of his own work with the facts gathered from these researches, his work would be much more valuable and worthwhile than a case in which his resources were restricted to few books and papers in the university's library.
Second, the ocean of online information accessible by everyone has made education significantly more independent. To be more specific, people don't necessarily need to bear the expenses of mentors and instructors to learn about a new field they which is attractive for them. Nowadays, one could learn how to play a new musical instrument, a new language, usage of a new computer software, an innovative cook recipe, and so on comfortably by the abundant educational videos on the internet. For example, one of my professors required me to learn Java programming language for my bachelor's project. If I hadn't had the option of free online courses related to Java programming, I would have needed to register for an extra class or hire a personal tutor since learning a programming language by reading books is almost an impossible task to do.
In conclusion, the information that the internet has brought about for people, not only has been beneficial for the advance of science but also has provided people a chance to educate themselves in various fields in which they might be interested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18028169014 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00424086946 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571830985915 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9038966725 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.461538462 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166889736379 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057128766032 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419492862015 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102483435284 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294997884772 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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