The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work,education or shopping.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work,education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The only solution to decrease from traffic in cities is by decreading the use of cars for human to travel from one place to another, either for education, shopping or work. I completely disagree with this statement, so I will mention in details as following;

To begin, public transportation or private cars are the most important means to relocate people to the required direction, as we can not reduce traffic effects by restricting people from using their cars to move wherever they want. In this way, it does not make sense. So government should take a radical action to avoid heavy traffic. For example, building more highway, and tunnel would stimulate to solve this phenomenon, So that people can shift to their directions comfortably. To illustrate, Dubai is a principal example, there are a lot of people come from all over the world to live and work in Dubai, as a result, cars have been used hugely by individuals, so it has worked on updating its route constantly to avoid congested roads. It has also a driverless train built over the ground, people use it, it can take humans to their work quickly, whereas each train comes every Five minutes on each station, in that light, individuals prefer to use this method instead of using their own cars to reach their requested place on time.

As a consequence, the less congested roads will be rised positively, so everything was arranged in plans to have more comfortable streets. In this case, they will have roads free from obstacles.

In brief, reducing the amount of traffic does not depend on reducing the need of people. So it should be there solutions, it can be taken into consideration to avoid traffic such as; constructing new tunnels, building new highways, and expanding the existed streets by making it bigger.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, for example, in brief, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88196721311 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69656933151 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4634767575 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207118469458 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844814349332 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876780478953 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126809818859 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776351008025 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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