In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
it is often argued that governments should increase the rate of tax on vehicles drivers in order to tackle the traffic issue and use this money to make public transport better. this essay will consider the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure.
one of the main benefits of charging personal car owners with a high tax rate is to discourage them from using their vehicles. Since it can be expensive for citizens to pay, they would use public transportation or bikes for traveling instead. Thus, the number of cars owners will decrease and traffic congestion will slowly decline. Another key advantage is improving the transportation system. For example, the state could use this fund to replace all the old trains and buses with the new ones, which consume fuel efficiently and more comfortable for passengers. this means increasing the number of people who will use transportation.
Despite these clear benefits, there are also some drawbacks. Firstly, many people have no choice but to drive every day as they live in areas which are not covered by public transportation such as rural areas or countryside. Therefore, if governments impose a higher tax, locals might face financial crisis. In addition, as the demand for motor vehicle decreases due to the high tax, many automobiles companies would cut their employment number. As a consequence, the country unemployment rate would be high.
To sum up, it is clear that while this policy has positives impacts, it has also some negative implications on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.116 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81163582279 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6649450399 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202873510918 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623362687973 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500740185334 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10745962611 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763257513551 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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