Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Problems such as traffic and pollution have become a major issue in developed cities due to the increase in the population. This essay will discuss the main causes of population-related problems including traffic and shortage of housing. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including developing rural areas and widening roads.
On the one hand, the increase in the number of people in cities has also worsened the road congestion. In addition, the demand for housing has also climbed. These circumstances are often caused because of many individuals moving from rural to urban areas in search of jobs and education. For example, one of my friends who live in a town moved to the city in search of employment but it was hard for him to find an apartment due to a huge demand for the same. However, he finally managed a small flat. The government and private contractors should come forward to plan big ventures of housing to accommodate all the needy persons with a particular amount of money.
On the other hand, the ministry should implement strict laws to follow traffic rules and it is also every individual responsibility to follow the same. Moreover, they should widen the roads in the name of development. For example, in my home town Miryalaguda, all the shops were demolished to widen the main road and authority compensate the shop owners by paying land money.
To conclude, in today’s fast-paced world more and more cities are becoming congested as a result of the rise in the inhabitant. This essay discussed how traffic and housing demand has increased because of the population. This essay also suggested that the solution to this problem is twofold: develop housing plots and broaden roads.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04152249135 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79883529442 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8949424946 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831596166519 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270795095135 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377745402852 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447683003544 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369340859297 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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