People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Colleges and Universities are often referred to as educational hubs. Students enroll to colleges in order to acquire knowledge, to enhance skills or to attain a greater career in future. However, there are many other reasons for the people to attend colleges. This essay will illustrate some of the possible reasons.
If we have a glance at the earlier times, people had mastered themselves in skill by studying at home via private tutors and attained the better career or jobs. But eventually, education structures and the system has been changing incessantly. In today's world colleges are the only entities to hold the authority of skill enhancement and certification. A college or university acts as the main basement for the enlightened people. Majority of the people attend universities to pursue the higher education which gears up their opportunities in the job market. Likewise, some people have a far target and to achieve them, they seek the college education. A great revolution has already kicked in almost all the fields of job markets and students seem to join to attain knowledge that creates avenues for their dream jobs.
Moreover, exposure to the social world is another constraint for the people to drive to the universities. Universities being the common roof for different people and so different cultures and skills, they inculcate the social behavior within the students.
It is undeniable fact that an educated society is the greater boon to the strong foundation of the country and for its future generations and this also makes people take admissions to the universities. Some opt to go to college for brightening their social status and some inherited fortune people might have different goals.
To conclude, I opine that the college environment acts as a precursor to a person's successful career. The above discussed are the some of the reasons that drive the people to the colleges or universities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17834394904 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85582679507 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8099417548 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6470588235 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382179526181 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121193811056 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804020234762 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217554078902 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415887373163 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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