People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviours expected there. They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviours. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many travellers are recommended that they must follow the behavioural aspects of the country they visit. Since the host country wants to exhibit the beauty of their culture and visitors should not demand them to behave as per their tradition. I completely support the point of view that people ought to explore the different custom of other nations rather than changing.
These days’ international travels are frequently increasing since people want to explore the other horizons. During the time of their visit, they must keep in mind that the culture is not going to be the same as theirs. This means if the guests fail to obey the norms it means they are disrespecting the cultural importance. In India, for example, it is a tradition that one should remove their shoes before entering the temple, and if the rules and not followed it means they are not obeying the traditional values of that place. Thus, that showcases the person is not interested in the traditional significance of the country.
Another reason is each and every nations has its known way and we cannot expect them to alter themselves because of the guests. The main motive behind following their own culture is to make the visitor understand the difference between their customs and others, likewise, the way food, clothing and language are. Gordon Ramsay, for instance, travels around the world to explore the delicacies of different countries rather than going there and teaching them the food he is been cooking or eating since ages. Therefore, it is essential that people must not modify other heritage values instead they should welcome the custom in a way it is.
In conclusion, people should not force the host country to follow the traditional norm of their culture because it is impolite to behave in such a manner. Additional, for one person they will not be able to amend the tradition they following for so many years.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95341614907 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52834134049 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518633540373 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6481586518 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260435181937 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087126821389 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658153538223 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169218390488 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762286762065 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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