plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea Some people think that they should be banned do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think that they should be banned do you agree or disagree?

Usage of plastic carriers has taken mammoth dimensions ever since the technology and globalisation came in a limelight. It is it irrefutable that these bags pave the way to pollution of soil and water. Still, there is a section of society which contrast to ban it. This essay endorse that these polythenes should be prohibited due to several reasons, elucidated in the ensuing segments.
First and foremost reason why plastic bags should be banned is that they are non biodegradable. To be more precise, when useless things are dumped in land and it takes hundreds of years to get mixed into soil and the fertility of soil is lost forever. In this case, land becomes barren. Not only this but when such used bags are burnt, create toxic gases which are inhaled by human beings from air and becomes the reason of myriad of diseases like aathma, cancer and many more. World Health Organisation, for instance, revealed that about 39% patients in whole the world suffer from respiratory issues due to the burning of plastic bags.
likewise throwing plastic bags in to see all lakes of effects the food chain to illustrate wasted polythenes into the water are intaken by aquatic animals which are main source of food for many societies. As such human life endures with number of health issues and sometimes and up in a fatal. What is more, due to the consumption of plastic bags many of the marine species are getting endangered. In other words, regular consumption of polythene results in dying water species and thus, many breeds of fishes get extinct.
However, some people think that plastic bags should be in use due to their benefits as they are spacious and reusable and there is not any alternative of them. Nevertheless, many countries are providing option of cloth and jute bags like, in India, where utilisation of these non biodegradable can be ignored. Resultantly, environment can be protected in terms of a flora and fauna.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that plastic carry bags should be strictly restricted all over the world in order to preserve animals and soil properties, otherwise, it may be hazardous for human beings and environment as well.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, in other words, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91553133515 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66925965398 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6008771149 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.117647059 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254447576676 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797972109059 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782346018014 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14187056975 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544455960775 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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