The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their chil

Essay topics: The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.

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For the last two decades, women have significantly changed their position in society and vital values. Before that, the most important aspect of their life were children. Mothers used to be housewives and spent a lot of time with young charges. Nowadays the situation has changed. Females tend to spend as much time at their job, as their husbands. Moreover, a lot of women try to grow a child alone. Thus, children have too much free time without parental supervision and as a result, the amount of minor crimes committed by teenagers has recently increased. There are few possible solutions to address the problem and I’ll introduce them in this essay.

The kids’ tendency to commit a crime can be caused by two main reasons. Firstly, children don’t busy enough. If they caught up with studying programs and other activities, they won’t have thoughts about stealing something, beating someone and list goes on and on. The best solution is to encourage parents to schedule kids’ daily routine to avoid this problem. Parents can enroll children for variety of classes, such as swimming, boxing, jogging and other.

The second reason for this issue is economical unrest and instability in Ukraine. For the last ten years, people get bogged down with poverty and misery. Parents can afford to buy costly items and clothes for children. As a result, there are kids who try to earn money from the very young age and kids who make a decision to start criminal life. To avoid this problem, government need to encourage contemporary youth to create their own families by that time, when they have enough income to maintain a family.

In conclusion, the most important solution for juvenile delinquency is keeping children under control and provide them by different sport activities apart from studying. Don’t be apathetic to your children and society would be protected!

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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'apart from', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27027027027 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.156756756757 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0837837837838 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0297297297297 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0324324324324 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0324324324324 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5984328486 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0432432432432 0.0326793684256 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00540540540541 0.00163938923432 330% => OK
Determiners: 0.0675675675676 0.0861772015684 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108108108108 0.021408717616 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00810810810811 0.011925033212 68% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1903.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11897106109 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382636655949 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311897106109 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221864951768 0.203846283523 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118971061093 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5984328486 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 72.6409564007 60.7387585426 120% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.55 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2307096631 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.15 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.7397106109 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.83950617284 1.69124875643 109% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359868501769 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0471022545135 0.102741220458 46% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0253372021505 0.0668466124924 38% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.424764497296 0.534860350844 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109314546193 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124735999495 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687467239271 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288081625585 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0665718660264 0.0638462369009 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231507665917 0.228012699653 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983001073399 0.058150111329 169% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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