Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
A significant evolution has been observed in the field of print & broadcast media. Media has always played a very vital role in developing or destroying someone's image, but advance technology has made their job even more easy in intervening in every situation. Now these channels and media mediums have become blackmailing giants that can change the game either by showing reality or spreading false news. It is upon news editor's discretion that how they can mold the news which eventually can give them better ratings.
To begin with, this profession has drastically changed its core mission of disbursing reality news to masses, rather they earn money by tweiking news. There are many influential factors involved such as politicians, business tycons etc. A fair example would be, success factor for any product would to be promoted in a truthfull manner.
To elucidate it further, media persons are very much aware how to play with audiences mindset. For instance, if they are broadcasting continuous bad news about a politician, people would start to think bad of him eventually. Nowadays, there is very little time for someone to authenticate what he reads or listen. People would blindly follow whatever image media portrays about anyone.
Today time is money, everyone is encircled in their life routines and ambitions so much that they barely get time to watch television and read news papers. Coming from reader/viewer's perspective, if they are sparing time to watch broadcast, they expect it to be pleasant. Something that entertains, gives relief to tired souls. These days, on every channel and news paper there are news about robbery, rape, war situations which people are already aware of and do not want to burden their mind more reading/watching about it. Media should be portraying positive image, should be broadcasting good news, achievements and more entertainment stuff that is fun to watch. For instance, a person coming from 9 to 7 duty would not like to watch a documentary about how many people are deprived of clean water, or what percentage of rape has increased.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, news is in the hand of media and they play it in their favor only. The core purpose of media is to bring truth on the table. It is ethically unacceptable that news is misused or manipulated for the sake of personal interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 362, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...souls. These days, on every channel and news paper there are news about robbery, rape, war...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06923076923 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80829594623 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.634454708 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.85 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105592311901 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315269994977 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235781495279 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555048281444 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271062204874 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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