In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
The recent spike in the rate at which a lot of mini-store in the neighbourhood are going to extinction continues to be a controversial topic as the mega-shops now gradually overtake the businesses of the small stores. This essay discusses the impact of this development and pointed out that this is a more favourable situation which depicts economy growth.
To start with, the nature of the huge modern trade stores allows them to hold authentic products most times. Due to this, it is easier for customers to rely on the products as they will be sure and guaranteed of its quality. Furthermore, the high supermarkets have good systems in place to allow them manage the products. Thus, best practices such as First In First Out (FIFO) is done and with this only unexpired products will be displayed on shelf and customers will not buy expired product which can cause health issues or even death. What is more, shopping in large malls allows one to save both time and cash. Time is precious, so it is better to travel once and buy in bulk even at discounted rate as many companies focuses their promotional activities on such channels.
Conversely, the closure of local stores implies loss of businesses to the indigenes. This is a challenge which needs to be mitigated especially as unemployment rate is currently on the high side. The local business owners can be encouraged to partner with big stores, with that, they can acquire necessary skills to build such empires of big supermarkets. Moreover, since neighbourhood stores are usually stone throw from people’s residents, their extinction means no room to purchase in urgent situations and this might increase stress people in the community encounter. To prevent such stress, people will need to adjust and become more organised in their purchase plan.
To sum up, quality of products can directly affect one’s life and should not be taken likely. It is therefore better to shop in reliable places where quality is guaranteed such as big malls regardless the distance and even if it means that some small stores will close down. Health is wealth and the wealth of individuals is the wealth of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, such as, to start with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95081967213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73272126917 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5425558863 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174450965408 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517625518146 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433612525578 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101884460828 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317928384928 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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