Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Celebrities attract a lot of attention from the public and living as a celebrity has its merits and demerits. Some people believe that the superstars are always too busy and they lack privacy. However, celebrities are rich and respected in the society. Ultimately, I think the gains of being a celebrity outweighs the problems.
There are some challenges in being a celebrity. They usually have very busy schedules, so they hardly have time for personal things because they are always occupied with programmes. For instance, a footballer spends a plethora of time outside home practising and playing for tournaments so as to remain relevant in the game, which might deprive him of having a quality time with his family members. Moreover, Very Important Personalities (VIPs) hardly have any private life. Whatever they do instantly makes the news.
Nevertheless, despite the challenges earlier stated, there are more gains in being a celebrity. They are highly respected in the community. People usually regard them in high esteem because of value they add to the society by impacting people’s lives with their endeavours. A number of celebrities are known to have touched lives with their songs, movies, sports, projects and gifts. What is more, many celebrities are wealthy. They have a lot of oppourtunities to make money because they are famous. For instance, some companies engage celebrities to endorse their products which can lead to sales increment, such business can earn the celebrity a fortune.
In conclusion, I think there are more benefits in being a celebrity because the possibility of becoming very wealthy and respected is very high. More than the problems celebrities face with time and confidentiality, which can be easily managed, the gains that come with their status cannot be overemphasized.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28865979381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92116433503 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3515929749 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238803355673 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853086717193 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779609927453 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169176561233 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918251813686 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.