In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Recently, shopping centers are emerging as the most popular place for people to purchase their necessary items, as a result of which the small locals shops have been impacted in a negative way. This essay aims to discuss the negative effects of these developments before finally suggesting some ideas to sustain local shops.
There are several reasons for the shopping complexes and malls to become a favourite spot for shopping. The mall houses several stores in one place which make it convenient for people to purchase all their daily essentials in the shortest possible time. Take grocery, for instance, the stores are placed in a way where if a customer does not find their desired item in one shop they can easily go to the next shop without walking a long distance.
Furthermore, there are many options to choose from. The large shopping complexes offer a variety of items to choose from, including foreign products. This not only gives the customers a range of options to decide from or experiment with new products but also they can easily access their favourite brands. In addition, there are many staff available to provide support and knowledge about the products that are unknown to people. For instance, some beauty products come with an authentic seal and may not be available in the local markets due to the high cost and low demand of the product.
However, small shops can work on their accessibility to raise their popularity as well. Shop owners can make a survey or talk to the local people on their preferred items and stocking their shops with those products. More staff could be hired who will cater to the consumers queries and provide their required product.
To conclude, from the preceding analysis it is evident that shopping centres have more number of stores under their wing as well as a variety of products together with a host of staff to guide them. Hence, it is imperative for consumers to be attracted to these places. I sincerely believe if the above suggested steps are taken into action the local shops will also sustain for a long time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87078651685 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42250812964 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4085412977 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3290438611 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107649031989 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781884691857 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193211764592 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05837985286 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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