In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic
development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban
areas but not in the country side. This situation may bring some problems for
the country as a whole.
What are these problems? How might they be reduced?
From the evidence of developing countries all over the world, it seems
inevitable that economic growth is generated in the business and industrial
centers of the major cities. As a result, urban citizens have access to jobs and
facilities that improve their living standards considerably. However, it is
usually the case that these are not equally enjoyed by people in the
countryside and this generates several problems for the countries concerned.
First of all, people from the countryside will try to move to the cities to get
more employment opportunities and better access to facilities available
there. However, this increase in the urban population puts great pressure on
housing and services, and leads to the creation of massive slum areas where
conditions may be lower than standards in the rural villages which are often
left under-populated. This can impact food production and can have severe
affects for people in both urban and rural areas.
Finally, as a country’s economy develops, there may be an increasing sense of
inequality as the towns get richer and the villages get poorer, and this may
lead to more crime and even civil unrest. The key to reducing these problems
seems to lie in improving the standard of living and the facilities available in
the countryside. Perhaps incentives can be offered to factories and
companies to relocate; road and rail networks can be built to make such
relocation possible; doctors and teachers could be required to spend part of
their professional lives in rural areas.
In conclusion, however, improving rural living standards requires investment
and political will that is sometimes not easy to generate.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, may, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38661710037 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87092840915 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7829467488 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.9 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184988699746 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758894773275 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495928961207 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463232022534 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496394834346 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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