Recently, many people know a few of their neighbours. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.
Modern world has become so gadget based that every room is now a house and people barely know their next door people. Because of the up-gradation of the communication facility the world has become smaller and people can connect with other people easily. However, this facility has made people less emotional and less communicative to their neighbor.
Neighbor are the first support to the people when they face some kind of problem. The society is created in such a way where every person needs others help in order to survive. In the past decade people used to visit the next door people to see if they are doing fine or else. But the mode of communication has changed a lot in such a way where people do not know their next door people but know a person from thousands of mile distance. Firstly the main cause behind this problem is relying too much on the internet based communication. There is also another reason which is gadget and software based socialization. For instance, recently I have faced an acute problem regarding an electric problem of my house. However, for that problem my Wifi signal has turned down and the charge of my phone has gone. Having no other way I needed to find help from my neighbor. I was so fortunate that my neighbors helped me. This lesson has changed my life’s perspective. Now I do think that communication with real world or face to face communication is much important in life.
In conclusion, it can be said that creating relationships with next door people is as much essential as knowing online friends.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72794117647 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63772865487 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0430714629 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190805703257 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637991281032 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420280766431 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125457962875 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285351216743 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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