As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for flights.
What problems does this have on the environment?
What measures could be taken to solve the problems?
In recent times because of tourism, numerous people are preferring to travel by air. This essay will explain the major problems of substantial increase in air-travel and propose possible solutions to curb this.
There are a plethora of obstacles arising due to more and more individuals travelling through jets, an important one to consider is the climate change. This is because when jet fuel is burnt, carbon molecules are released, when these combine with oxygen, carbon dioxide is produced, which causes depletion of ozone layer due to greenhouse gases emitted from this molecular reaction. As a result, the severity of ultraviolet rays has increase and causing health concerns such as skin allergies. Contrastingly, in the past, the air traffic was very minimal and the harm caused to environment is negligible. To combat this problem, organizations should shift towards 'X-Planes,' as these run on batteries. Accordingly, during the test runs of such flight models, it is proven to be more Eco-friendly by reducing 20% of the emissions per single passenger.
Another cardinal danger of rise in commercial air traffic is the water pollution. More often the lubricants, and other chemicals such as deicing fluids used on aeroplanes fall on the ground while water-storm run off mixes with these and flows into the nearby water streams to pollute clean water. For example, it is reported in media that majority of the water bodies in the environs of airports are polluted due to chemical liquids mixing with the ground water in airports. Dealing with the issue, while restricting international flight travel will be a mammoth challenge, domestic frequency should be minimized. To achieve this, there needs to be an extrotionate increase in the domestic travel ticket prices. To compensate, there needs to be a massive improvement in road transportation system. By virtue of this, the increasing demand for flights can be mitigated.
In conclusion, climatic changes and pollution of water bodies are vital issues of airways. However, by investing in electric planes and reducing frequency of domestic flights this can be negated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30678466077 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86522865509 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59587020649 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4072689027 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.823529412 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158822383533 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553791600651 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522451852495 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095602648991 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360452902394 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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