The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer’s money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In order to discuss, purpose of prisons is to punish those that are involved in unforgivable offenses.They must accept why are they in and paying price for their crimes, Beside that, its one of the thinking these days taking height that to educate them with technical courses lead to the waste of taxpayers's money, in other words they can't be rehabilitate.
To dig, Prisons are made for the high profile criminals, they need to understand they have done something very serious which is not according to the laws if living in a moral society and jails is to let them punish. Of course, offenders are restricted to uncomfortable living conditions,having lonely without their families, also food is not up to the mark and more importantly you must have to work to survive out there, however, in our society prison is one of the place that everyone feels ashamed even to go beside it. But sending the one who have done serious crimes to prison for punishment is very necessary.
Furthermore, some think that mobilizing them in terms of education and training is not going to work as this is totally waste of money because they have nothing to do with it. Their mind is full of crimes so how can they learn something skillful after all they have spent their lives committing offenses and they are used to it, So it's not possible to change themselves, even though there is no mind left to be able to earn for them and have good relationships in their remaining lives.
To discuss my opinion, It is obvious and for me it is sure that for every criminal activity should have its lesson regarding punishment, By penalize the one who is involve in serious offenses must send them to jail so that they realize that rule of law is there and specifically he will think he is wrong. Secondly, again I am not in a favor of second statement, But to give them proper education specially skillful activities, Moreover awareness is very important for them to realize their crimes, however, they have done something irresponsible, Obviously education can bring a big change in someone's life, It's one of the tool that bring crime rate down.In short, I would say education is an option that makes a big difference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, after all, in short, of course, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72467532468 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67678689079 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54025974026 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.357938787 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.375 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.125 20.7667163134 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19919130934 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106024377479 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484072514543 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126939152982 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278331029211 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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