Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather thatn private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
At present, scientific research across the world is carried out and controlled sometimes by governments, sometimes by private companies. While there are some arguments in favour of scientific research by corporation. I agree with this view that this should be funded and controlled by the state.
A good reason that its better government subsidise and observe scientific research is that despite of that private sector argues that it is willing to undertake scientific research, there are two dangers for this.
In terms of the quality and objectivity of the research itself, corporations which carry this out may be tempted to manipulate results in order to maximize profits. In the other words, there have been numerous scandals as a result of new products being introduced hurriedly after inadequate trials. For instance, thalidomide, developed by a German drug company, resulted in the birth of thousands of malformed children. From an ethical perspective, leaving research into areas such as genetic engineering in the hands of corporations may have profound social consequences such as GM crops, with unproven effects which may destroy entirely whole ecosystems as a result of meddling with nature.
another reason that governments should control and fund scientific research is that although governments have to allocate resources to many areas of public spending, it is essential that they be responsible for scientific research. Firstly, the highest standards can be set by providing funding for university departments to carry out high-quality research designed to benefit society, not to break into new markets or to gain a competitive edge. Furthermore, knowledge thus gained can be shared worldwide throughout the academic community.
Secondly, government-decision making ithe best way to prioritize expenditure on specific areas of research, taking into consideration the needs of society, both present and future. One example is the development of renewable energy to meet growing demands.
In conclusion, according to some, state should fully fund and supervise the scientific research and I agree strongly with the view that governments should bear sole responsibility for that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61976047904 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10900717815 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0944401091 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.071428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341147609148 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114282248408 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908932405802 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183344472511 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100683367285 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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