Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist. To what extent do you agree.
These days, youngsters can choose their career from huge variety of professions ranging from a scientist to an artist. However, it is commonly argued that professional experts have been better treated by modern society in contrast to artists and musicians. I partially agree with this statement.
On one side, scientists and other experts work for the development of nation. every year, their potential work is recognized by the govenment and the citizens. They are regularly awarded the noble prizes and president awards to carry on the good work. They are the pride of the nation,through their achievements, they make impossible things as easy as an apple pie. Moreover every country, spend decent percentage of its economy income for research work, which is also an act of encouragement to those researchers and scientists. every Indian parent want their child to become a technology expert. To some extent, such profession">professionals are valued more than other workers.
On the other side, musicians and artists have their own charm. They have become the ideal and role models of young generation. I am sure, none of the youth remember the great work of scientists but they remember each and every song of their favorite singer and musicians. these artists have a long struggle period and only few of them reach the level of success that is why most of the parents are afraid of this career choice. but these days, artists also receive number of awards for their accomplishments. they have huge fan following around the globe. they are very much valued by their crazy fans.
In conclusion, these days we have variety of professions to choose from. every profession has its own values and achievements. I partially agree that scientists and technologists are more valued than artists and singers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17288135593 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15897648507 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.508184014 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17331321154 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555718069722 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682107538203 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117455855592 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340039268961 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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