scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. some people believe that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work.
discuss both view and give your opinion.
Scientists believe that many diseases stem from unhealthy diet. According to, some people believe are of the view that awareness is the solution to overcome this problem, however, others are not. This essay will discuss both sides of view in detail and provide evidences to why the education is not effective way.
Admittedly, educating people about the hazards of eating unhealthy foods can bring some benefits. First and foremost, it will be revealed for them that this kind of food consists of excessive harmful ingredients like fat, salt and sugar. In addition, every person knows that the more junk food are consumed the more will be affected by heart diseases. Finally, this information would help people to modify their eating habit to healthy way. For instance, pedagogical experts by adding courses about healthy diet could teach students to how choose the nutritious-rich food. Hence, the result of education, people would be aware of demerits and its consequences.
Although, the importance of education cannot be denied, the lack of information is not the only reason of eating fast food. The main factor which makes people to eat these unhealthy foods is that they do not have enough time to cook traditional food. Furthermore, junk foods are available everywhere and every time from supermarkets to restaurants. Finally, there is no doubt that the taste, smell and appearance of convenience foods are far better than traditional ones so that it is reasonable to attract more people.
Overall, it seems to me that while, the education is the method to improve the awareness of people about unhealthy diet, the advantages including saving time, availability and more delicious outweigh the drawbacks. So, I clearly state that the education will not work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21678321678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71098777959 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9680210771 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376275527486 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117490938967 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620825889298 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216400149503 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759437300258 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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