Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
The issue of consumerism has grown in importance over the past few decades. According to, people tend to more buy something that does not need and even borrow huge money in order for possessing them. This essay will discuss the origin of this kind of behavior and put forward some solutions to tackle this problem.
Nowadays, thanks to technology, the pace of invention have been incredibly increased. Undoubtedly, the latest product would be more attractive in terms of appearance. Hence, some people have a tendency to buy a new one without attention to cost despite own goods has the same functionality. Furthermore, advertisements play a significant role to create unreal needs. By which I mean that advertising by using tricks and catchy slogans present misinformation for people to persuade them to buy things they do not need. For example, some cars factories in Iran offer dishonest options on cars and introduce it as a better product while there is no difference between their products.
There are some methods can be adopted to prevent people from doing such behavior. Education would be the best way to inform people to recognize their real needs. By this way, people not only waste their money on worthless things but also can invest in asset ones. Besides, governments could make a legal obligation for advertising. There should be some laws to prevent people from being deceived by advertising and impose punishment for who fail to adhere to this law.
Overall, it can be said that the main reasons for purchasing unreal needs and get into debt because of them is the desire of people for the fashion goods and unethical adverts. In order to solve this problem, raising awareness and imposing laws for the advertising enable people to make a choice wisely and based on their needs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96688741722 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68360681499 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5124524628 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38227469036 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109496255975 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824963485973 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227404243938 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617884578243 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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