Some people believe the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. However, others argue that there are still some advantages to adverts. discuss both view and give your opinion.
The beneficial effect of advertisement is debatable. Some people are of the view that prohibiting different advertising can bring benefits and would eliminate its negative results. This essay will discuss why advertisements can be brought about detrimental effects but why their advantages nor should deny.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that the advertising industry has made trouble in some cases. It is more likely to persuade people to buy their unreal needs. Using tricks and catchy slogan at public places in forms of banners, posters, and flyers, also, broadcasting at TV could impact on unconscious minds of people in order for consuming useless products. As a result, if the trend of society consumerism, it would be possible that the resources have been depleted. However, it may not correct to say that there should be deterrent because of the thoughtlessness of a minority of people, it seems appealing in the deeper inspection.
On the other hand, raising awareness and lowering price is of the great positive points of putting an advertisement in newspaper, social media, streets and other places. For example, most of them appeared at markets offer a discount on several products and it leads to people can choose the most affordable goods. Moreover, the majority of advertisements give information about products and their services. Therefore, it gives the opportunity to people to find their needs accurately and conveniently.
Overall, it can be said that advertisement not only do individuals introduce products but also enable them to make the intelligent choice. I believe that although consumerism might happen through advertising, the advantages outweigh the drawback.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36567164179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04101501679 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.536601487 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270565357041 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780839636185 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476824830322 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143731294418 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499861458536 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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