Some people say History is one of the most important subjects. Other people say that, in today's world, subject like science and technology are more important than History.
discuss both view and give your opinion.
In the world today, some individuals argue that history is of paramount importance; while others
tend to have a strong preference for subjects such as Science and Technology. Although I agree
that Science and Technology are fundamental, I believe that History plays an equally vital role.
On the one hand, those who argue that Science and Technology are important base their opinions
on the following arguments. Firstly, nowadays, there is a growing trend towards technological
advancements. Our daily routine seems to be nothing without the support of a variety of
technological and scientific breakthroughs that satisfy our basic needs as well as recreational
activities. Smartphones are great testaments to this explanation as it is infeasible for people,
especially teenagers to stop staring at their phones for a day. Secondly, in some developed
nations, education recently gravitates towards incentivizing workforce in science-related field.
Consequently, this drives a tendency to focus on those subjects in students from other developing
countries who desire to get access to an advanced educational environment from abroad.
By contrast, History should be regarded as one of the most crucial school subjects. Firstly, every
person needs to gain a wealth of knowledge about where they come from. It will be ridiculous if
you are a successful scientist but having not a single definition about your national historic
events. Secondly, learning history can positively improve our characteristics. History lessons
make avenues to plethora of moral lessons in gratefulness, patriotism and appreciation for what
we have obtained. For instance, having lectures about Vietnamese wartime catalyzed my
gratitude for my national historic figures such as President Ho Chi Minh and other heroes, who
have done wonders for Vietnamese’ safety and peace.
Overall, I am convinced that History and Science and Technology should be considered of
balanced importance as all those subjects act as precursor to fully develop every student.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19713217705 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9846437849 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.066666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175402511216 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594604249118 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561214971501 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480333118294 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523343878652 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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