You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say- give details of the job-why do you think the interview went well?-why do you need to know the resu

Essay topics:

You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say
- give details of the job
-why do you think the interview went well?
-why do you need to know the result?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you about my condition. I am a candidate for the vacancy of your company. The position is web developer manager and its requirement including: master degree related to computer, ability team working and data managing. I guess that the interviewer has positive idea on me.

Let me explain in more detail. I have master degree in software engineer from the Sharif University. In addition, I had occupied a full-time career in an authentic company before then as a web designer. Although it was a well-paid job, I got away because of some pressing matter. When interviewer look at my resume confessed that it is of great excellence that all requirements bring in one person!

Would you kindly be able to report the final decision the interview as soon as possible? 7 days past from my interview and during this time, many jobs have been offered me but I would be delighted to work for your office. Therefore, if I know that I accept, I will neglect the others.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully

Parya Amini

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arliest convenience. Yours faithfully Parya Amini
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, i guess, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.828125 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76628699704 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692708333333 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9774733873 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193752946619 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551556106335 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397784014114 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112400709729 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245273555043 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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