The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare for work in the future.
The issue of altering the working condition has grown in importance over the past few decades all around the world. According to, every person tends to consider all of his opportunities and works on several jobs. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forward two suggestions for jobs in the future.
There are several reasons that make changes in the work of condition. Firstly, there is no doubt that the technology play main role in this alternation. Many jobs do not need human forces and machines are replaced. For example, there are no longer workforce in farm because the majority of agricultural works have been done by special systems. Moreover, economical crisis in recent years make many employers to minimize their companies and fire their employees. Hence, it is reasonable for staff to do different careers. Finally, although most of people receive enough income to build a convenient life, sometimes their greed would not allow them to be pleasant. The consequence of this manner is that people force themselves to work more than before.
There are some suggestions that may be effective for careers in the future. It is obvious that if a person followed own wishes and foster own talents, he/she would be able to find unique job in the future. Beside this, the internet and technology would be an integral part of works in the years to come, so that it is better to spend training course based on these materials.
In conclusion, it could be said that technology, economic problems and the human greed are the reasons of changing the work conditions and keep them busy all the time. Investment on own talents and acquisition the internet and technology are the suggestion for work in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...been done by special systems. Moreover, economical crisis in recent years make many employ...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...do different careers. Finally, although most of people receive enough income to build a conven...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e suggestion for work in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95254237288 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60383117728 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3897439343 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30496525421 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952997552586 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619579148419 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183366460822 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474709048189 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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