Should people get a job right after school or should they attend university. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Pursuing a higher education or getting into the employment after school is an unsettled debate. Few believe that, in today's world there is no need of university degree to earn their bread and butter, however, other consider that it provides platform and recognition in setting up strong prospective career. My thoughts are inclined towards pursuing a degree.
Firstly,It is believed that updation in job is the most common factor across all the sector and hence, there is a need of the day to absorb the new system by enrolling to college after school. Further to that higher qualification provides a wider scope to get promoted in an organisation along with an hike in salary.For example, in the recent survey conducted by Indian Employment exchange, it is revealed that the degree holders earn twice than the non degree holders. This output has encouraged several individuals to opt for higher studies.
On the other hand, few rely that experience has more consideration that theoretical knowledge, as practicality is the key trait looked at during the recruitment process. People these days usually get job after school and keep on shifting so that their designation and remunerations is inclined upward. Talents are also recognized these days, For example, school passed kid had programmed an incredible math application in India, which came to the notice of Google Chairman and was offered job with high pay scale even without considering his degree. In addition higher education these days are commercial and affordable by rich people only. Therefore to over come this in today's world knowledge and experience has power to cover up the need of further education.
In conclusion, Higher education is always an added advantage for the overall development and caters to the need of current job requirement. Hence one must always believe in pursuing higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22516556291 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81374549682 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3447779206 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102692525671 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384089706228 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515657933239 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595597440588 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271939621485 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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