In many of the cultures especially traditional societies elderly people play a vital role in families and young generation try to use their experiences and advices. However, there are different views about the issue. Some people believe that young people should follow their elderly people in all condition. In contrast, another group disagree with them completely. I personally think young people can benefit from using elderly people's advices.
Supporters of obeying elderly people in all condition argue that they gain valuable life lessens during their life. Therefore, young generation can use the significant experiences of old people for their important future decisions such as getting married or children upbringing. In addition, elderly people due to their experiences are more likely to pay attention different aspects of affaires while, young people in most of cases make a decision based on their feeling in a special occasion and they are neglect from the consequences of their decision in the long-run. In other words, young people are able to make better decision for their life based on using the experiences of elderly people.
On the other hand, another group maintain that elderly people are related to previous generation and their experiences are not suitable for modern lifestyle in the 21st century. For instance, the majority of old people find it difficult to use from the Internet and social networks whereas many young people are too reliant on these digital tools. In other words, the Internet is the main source of information for teenagers and they do not need expired information and advices of elderly people.
Overall, as I mentioned before the experiences of old people is highly beneficial to young people. Using from old people solutions not only reduce the risk of decision for young people but also have more merits for them in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22368421053 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58945730365 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2221690427 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239293868616 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111094049433 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720048120001 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181412967708 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482998120209 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.