Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Almost, every sport needs sponsorship from various companies in order to organise mega-events. Many believe that the advertisement for sponsors in sports activities is a negative development while others disagree. In my opinion, this is a positive development.
Sports are important due to various reasons and therefore their promotion is also necessary. From promotion to organising events, various sports bodies depend on sponsorships. For instance, Punjab kabaddi federation is dependent on Preet tractors manufacturing company as they provide a large amount of funds and in result, they showcase their agricultural equipment kabaddi tournaments across the state. This is a win-win situation for both parties as the organisers of sports need the money and the sponsors need a source of advertisement.
Still, there are some drawbacks of this mutual understanding, as some companies which promote sports are the manufacturers of products like tobacco and they paste company logo on jerseys of players. As a result, the youngsters who watch sports can pick that bad habit of taking tobacco while watching their favourite sports star wearing a jersey with a tobacco product logo. In addition, it is a universal truth that in order to become a successful sportsperson one has to go through rigorous training for years but the soft drink companies sell lies by showing that the usage of their products has made superstars.
In conclusion, In order to survive various sports need the money of big multinational companies but government agencies bring laws regarding sponsorship so that the name of a sport should not be used to sell products which are unhealthy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38549618321 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02371268686 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9480135855 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199296923058 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823126772676 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621912019769 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124071370049 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562849363803 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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