Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Sport is an important part of healthy life and nowadays it is connected to marketing strategies, most of the companies use as a tool in order to endorse their products. The majority of the population thinks that it is a great thing to increase particular products sells, boost stock values and overall revenue in terms of the company’s prospect. However, others believe that it has a tremendous drawback in relation to consumers. In my opinion, definitely, it will impose negative aspects that might affect general people.
A sport plays a vital role in everyone’s life; recent marketing trends are changing radically in the sports industry because it is used as a marketing medium to sell products or services. Most of the people love sports, they stimulated to buy products/services and the companies use this thing as a tool to promote their products by backing sports events. For example, IPL Cricket matches are one of the most famous game events in India, which is organized every year in the month of spring. Around 90% of Indian companies sponsor IPL matches and displays their products/services in order to boost their sales which ultimately increase their revenues and financial prospects.
On the other hand, sponsoring sports events will encourage people to purchase things which they rarely use in daily life. In this case, people who are interested in sports will spend a huge amount of money on things related to sports they love and those we can count as un-necessary expenditure. For instance, according to a survey reported by the BBC news regarding general population spending in one month of IPL matches in 2018. The results were pretty shocking as people spend around 40% extra money as compared to other months expenses on things, which are connected with the Cricket. They are buying those all just because it is endorsed by their favourite team or a player and all IPLL teams including players are sponsored by local or international firms.
In conclusion, sponsoring sports will definitely hike sports as well as company stocks. Nevertheless, in my opinion, it has too much downside in terms of the general public. It is simply a mind-diversion of people, which is encouraging them to buy services/products they really don’t need in daily life scenarios.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ng trends are changing radically in the sports industry because it is used as a market...
Line 13, column 159, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
...t has too much downside in terms of the general public. It is simply a mind-diversion of peopl...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12732095491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96201090025 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533156498674 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0362997612 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144434909985 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502279155159 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388959456914 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925116886906 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113687363924 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.