In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Childhood is an important phase of every children's life. In few nations children have very strict rules to follow, while others believe they should be given complete freedom. In my view, I suggest kids should follow strict rules to ensure they nurtured with good values, more discipline in studies and to prevent them from criminal activities.
Firstly, learning good values during childhood days is very crucial. When they learn good habits while help to follow till end of their life. For instance, in few South Indian schools children should say good morning to their teachers while entering into their class. Hence, such rules will imbibe them to respect elders and teachers in their early days, which they will not forget till their death. Moreover, by following strict rules, it will help them to be socially responsible person to the society.
Secondly, some strict rules which give more emphasis on their education. If children do not have such rules then they could easily deviate from education, which will be a drawback for their life. For instance, in few government schools children do not have strict rules to study their subjects, hence, they tend to perform poorly when compared to student who learned from the school with adequate rules.
Finally, most importantly strict rules will ensure children from involving in criminal activities. In Russia youngsters who are convicted for some crimes have to follow to strict rule in prison, to prevent them from doing such unethical events in future. Therefore, it has been believed that children should follow strict rules to prevent them from illegal actions.
In conclusion, as the proverb says, "children are the future of any country". When children oblige to follow strict rules, which will ensure them to learn good behaviour and to become socially responsible person to the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22591362126 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41788350389 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5110743969 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354084057412 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132921585201 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769353586265 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220561710122 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655321809361 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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