In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
It is unfortunate that health issues among people have grown in many parts of the world. To connect this trend to fast food, however, is considered inaccurate. It is thus disagreed with that government should impose a tax on this kind of food. To prove this true, social network trends will be analyzed as more feasible causes.
To embark on, it has been seen that people are getting obsessed due to consuming of too much fast food, but it is also true that excess of anything is not good for health and thus, it could not be blamed that growing prevalence of fast food is the cause of increasing health issue. Firstly, almost everyone is busy with their hectic work nowadays and hardly get a time to cook the food. Whereas, fast food such as burger, pizza is ready to eat, help people to save their time from busy schedule.
To recapitulate it, imposing a higher tax will make fast food unaffordable to poor and low income people. This will force them to cook at home. While this might cause them some inconvenience, it is good for their health. However, taxes will not discourage affluent customers to buying fast food. In addition to it, most people who consume fast food aware of its health consequences. For instance, a survey conducted in India, revealed that people are compelled to buy fast food due to their busy schedule. One of the main reasons of increase of fast food is that they can be cooked in a matter of minutes and many people are consuming it because healthier alternatives are not easily available.
To conclude, increasing tax on fast food will deter low level income groups to buying it. If the government really wants to control the fast food then steps should be taken to make healthier foods easily available and reasonable prices.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45022031756 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4216789713 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348709549454 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124968171098 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650165760989 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22357575707 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280051290354 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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