In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
It is unfortunate that health issues among people have grown in many parts of the world in the last few years. So some people believe that the result of too much fast food is the main reason for the increasing number of health problems and it is necessary to impose a higher tax on this type of foods. In my opinion, I completely disagree that this is the best way to tackle the issue of deteriorating public health in relation to fast foods because it will deter only the middle and low-income group only.
To embark on, imposing a higher tax will make food unaffordable to poor people. Indigent people are not able to afford cooking materials and also don’t have the place to cook. They live on the mercy of fast foods only. Furthermore, nowadays, more people are job oriented and hardly get time to cook food due to their hectic work schedule. In one of the current survey in India, it is found that many working people inclining towards fast food in recent years. However, taxes will not discourage affluent customers from buying fast food. So, only average customers will be affected by increasing tax.
To recapitulate it, fast foods are easy to cook and can be ready in a matter of minutes. On the other hand, it takes much time to prepare traditional food. In today’s busy world, fast food is the best to satiate our hunger because to prepare, people don’t require much knowledge of cooking. For example, many youngsters prefer snacks and readymade food like Maggie while they are away from the native country. In One of the recent study in Hongkong, people revealed that they are compelled to buy fast foods because of their busy schedule even though they are aware of the health problems. Most people are consuming fast foods because healthier alternatives are not easily available.
To conclude, increasing tax on fast food will deter low-level income groups to buying it and will impact on daily life schedule. If the government really wants to control the fast food then steps should be taken to make healthier foods easily available and reasonable prices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to cook
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82222222222 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46818646873 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530555555556 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7670601658 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357838565272 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120440778432 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921636121204 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232183534018 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070579834774 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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