In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
we are living in a consumer culture world where,fast food considered useless and even detrimental to country. Thereby,people believe that authorities concerned should firmly tackle that issue by imposing high tax companies provided that kind of food.This essay will analyse this phenomena using examples from USA and Middle East countries to illustrate points and demonstrate argument.
There is multifarious problems related to fast food . First and foremost,since that habit are spreaded and become more attractive ,the rate of health conditions had increased. people are persuaded by advertisement to increase the consumption of unhealthy meals ,specially, children who are easily influenced by adverts. As a result,parents are put on a pressure to buy that products to satisfy their kids. Secondly, we could have reduced the impact of that problem if we have proper knowledge of the nutritional facts in junk food.
On the other hand, The government should take prompt action to address that crucial situation by forge a partnership with civil society in order to deter that phenomena.while people assume that people should control their eating habits I believe that taxes should be imposed on any institution provide unhealthy products and the advertisement which encourage people to buy that products.The American food and Drug organisation published research at 2018 showed that fast food is the main cause of 70 types of cancers. Egypt as example make huge campaign to promote to healthy life by enhance young people to eat clean and play sports.
In conclusion, health problems related to fast food may seem harmful and complicated;However, it can easily solved by law. As such, I support the idea of imposing high taxes on that kind of food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36823104693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05312629053 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.937935652 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282890375407 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994782236546 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599874543076 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166812139378 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267194076871 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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