Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie.
Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie?
What factors contribute to the success of a movie?
Since the development of technology, the opportunity to opt various means of movie have been available. Proceeding from this, an opinion exists that a lot of money is needed for creating a film. I am convinced that the cost of excellent pictures cannot be low and the role of director and marketing are essential in this issue.
First of all, I am confident that huge amounts of money spent on the name of the author and special effects can contribute to the prosperity of certain film. In this case every dollar influences the quality and characteristic, which will be obtain at the final. In addition, the actor's fees depend on their fame and reputation. For example, according to the statistical studies of the Media Institute of Kazakhstan, about 70% of people prefer to watch an expensive movie than a cheap one. Thus, the more money is spent on production, the better the film will be.
I think, paying full attention to person, who will manage the pic and is the main task for success of a new product. Collaboration with good scenarists can provide great perspectives for a future film. Moreover, advertising possess the property to increase the people's attention and it is also necessary. For instance, “DC Comics” spends a lot of money on creating their masterpieces and also earns even more. Hence, the people, who work in the field of film industry are very important for previously set goals.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that group of managers and artists can impact on desire results. I am all for the idea that millions of different moneys make films better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of different moneys make films better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89051094891 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81077821718 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2481599787 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191055801627 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540656426699 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426598484163 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101037211127 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131323492975 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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