Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is always argued by some parents that kindergartens are the best place for children of the age group 2-5. However, parents who worked argue that guardians and grandparents are best choice for taking care of their young ones. I believe that while playway has fully trained teachers, they cannot take the place of family members in understanding the feeling of their offsprings at early age.

Some argue that childcare centres are best because they have well guided instructors who instil discipline and good habits in young ones, and teach them basic lessons which help them in their primary school age. As a result, they become disciplined student in their future school years and get habit of studying among their Peer groups. For instance, Oxford University revealed the report that children who attend pre-nursery schools are more likely to grasp the primary school environment in their future. Despite this, I would say that kindergarten School cannot pay individual attention to the needs of kids which could only possible in home environment.

On the other hand, family members play a vital role in caring of children at early age, because they can easily understand the feeling of their offsprings which children do not tell their teachers due to hasitation such as going for washroom or eating which is not possible to understand in large group of young ones by teachers.Consequently, grandparents or other family members can give individual attention to their children. For example, BBC news reported that 70% of children are easily shared their feelings with their family as compared to their teachers.

In conclusion, although pre-schools are better choice in inculcating the discipline among young children, family members are best choice in the early years of Children as they can easily communicate with them about their feelings.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25838926174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75150801571 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7176125407 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.7 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308135284217 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135298915333 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662290207091 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196237925247 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463802688547 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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