Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflict between nations. Discuss both pints and give your opinion.
International sports events are becoming more popular these days and people are impatiently waiting for these events to take place. Some believe these sports festivals create good cause to ease cultural, religious, ethnic and political differences, while others disagree. This essay intend to discuss both views and evaluate accordingly.
Olympic is a wonderful example to set as which, brings many nations to single sports battle arena. More than two hundred countries compete against each other in range of sports categories to win gold medals and to become world best sport nation. In such games everyone forget all the differences and sit together and support their countryman to win the event. Moreover in some games regardless to the country people love to see famous sportspersons to win. As an example, Hussain Bolt, the greatest athlete ever born in track and field is loved by people all over the world.
On the other hand, this kind of competitive sports create acute stress response situations between team players and supporters. There are plenty of examples throughout the sports history of such incidents which has led to tragic and unfortunate situations. In cricket world it is very well-known the conflict between India and Pakistan. Most of the games end up with tensed situation or fight between supporting crowds and matches were abandoned.
In my opinion these games have their own negative and positive impacts but, organizers must be more cautious when organizing such sport events. If any conflicting parties participating for an event they should take proactive counter measures and enhance cultural affairs.
In conclusion, when considering all the facts above there are merits and demerits in this competitive sports. However, sports events organizer should shoulder this responsibility of building peace among different people, cultures and nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45392491468 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68498534293 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682593856655 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1167887305 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282932495545 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079009046038 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417826631182 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139963392644 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571210608005 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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