Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Every individual goes through distinct phases in their life albeit either good or bad. While some commentators deem to change their condition if they are not comfortable with it, other analysts think that all circumstances should be accepted considering as a part of their life. In this essay, I shall refer to some general examples to discuss both the views followed by my perspective.
To begin with, it is intuitively obvious that underprivileged are not granted with the opportunities that are easily available for others. In such cases, blaming one's destiny or other people for their bad situations is not credible. Instead, they could put their best efforts and could attempt to achieve their goals. To exemplify, numerous students from poverty-stricken families, despite having fewer resources of education, get employed in Multi-National companies. Similarly, if a person wants to come out of an undesirable occupation, it is achievable with hard work as well as determination in their own interests.
However, on the other hand, no matter how hard we try some unfortunate circumstances could not be curbed. Conventional wisdom has it that some situations are bound to happen. For instance, the demise of a closed relative or a family member could not be changed or reverted back. Having said that, the only thing that people could do in these conditions is to accept and move on with their life. Moreover, sometimes humankind chooses to take shortcuts in their dreadful times. For example, to involve in human trafficking and illegal drug businesses with the expectation of making money in a short span of time. Consequently, they end up in prison or lose their lives.
To conclude, in my opinion, although it is incontrovertible that mankind has no control over several circumstances, they could undoubtedly improve the ones that they can. Also, to ameliorate does not mean getting into trouble due to unlawful alternatives.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24358974359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08452586353 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.451323185 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2352941176 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157855848833 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478335975522 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588598232043 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851206054263 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300494222868 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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