Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
According to some people, successful are those who are born with a talent whilst others opine that to be effective, one must work hard and reinforce a particular sport on daily basis. This essay will bring forth both the sides along with my opinion which inclines towards the latter statement in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are some people who believe that successful persons are gifted and need not to undergo any training for reaching heights. They naturally master their area of sports. For example, the master-blaster, Sachin Tendulkar started playing cricket at the age of eight. He did not go to any formal cricket academy then to take some coaching but years later he became an international brand. Hence, few individuals are blessed with the inborn talent and they keep climbing the ladder of success with time.
However, others reckon that to be efficacious in sports, only hard work and practice will yield the result. To be permanent at a particular sport, reinforcement is the only key and merely saying that a person is born with talent will not suffice this. For example, Micheal Phelps, the famous American swimmer, holds a record for the most Olympics medals including 23 gold medals and gives credit to his hard work and practice only to make up to this level. Consequently, I second this viewpoint and believes that no outcome is achieved unless efforts are made.
To conclude, it can be said that some persons are genetically talented and need not to undergo any formal training to be successful while other people think hard work and practice is the key to success. I accord with the latter and believes that to be successful one must invest time and effort frequently in playing the sport so as to achieve the success.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undergo'?
Suggestion: undergo
...cessful persons are gifted and need not to undergo any training for reaching heights. The...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undergo'?
Suggestion: undergo
...s are genetically talented and need not to undergo any formal training to be successful wh...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... effort frequently in playing the sport so as to achieve the success.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54610025124 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5120876901 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331398631311 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108494938142 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929155664042 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204358829557 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096048190547 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undergo'?
Suggestion: undergo
...cessful persons are gifted and need not to undergo any training for reaching heights. The...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undergo'?
Suggestion: undergo
...s are genetically talented and need not to undergo any formal training to be successful wh...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... effort frequently in playing the sport so as to achieve the success.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54610025124 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5120876901 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331398631311 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108494938142 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929155664042 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204358829557 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096048190547 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.