Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals commented that death penalty should be abandoned, while the opponents debated that such sentence is necessary for criminals who are convicted of severe evils. In this essay, both kinds of opinions will be explored and I deem that this extreme penalty should be abolished.
In many contemporary societies, judicial murder no longer exists due to ethical concerns. To begin with, death execution, is used to be regarded as an inhumane justice as such kind of sentence is somehow built on a spirit of revenge rather than a genuine penalty. Other than that, it stifles any possible chance to reserve the case. In fact, in history, some murderers who were sentenced to death were proven to be innocent finally. Yet, sadly, quite a number of the scapegoats were found guiltless only after judicial murders were executed. Seen in this light, capital punishment should be avoided just in case there is any wrong justice.
However, the opponents support killing the criminals who commit severe crimes owing to several main reasons. Firstly, the fear from such an extreme punishment can definately deter people from being a lawbreaker. Consequently, the whole community can be benefited from a lower crime rate, for instance, in terms of economic growth and tourism development. Secondly, death execution is conducive to saving public expenses in prison management. It has been deemed contradictory for the public to contribute their hard-earning wages in affording the lives of extremely heinous prisoners. Therefore, sending those culprits to death seems more appropriate than caging them for a life imprisonment.
To conclude, I advocate abolishing death penalty as it is not a humane means of punishment even for those who are serious offenders, although it is understandable that such extreme punishment looks better in some circumstances.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35153583618 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88501909149 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631399317406 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6340853089 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252613666333 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075116009962 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667791211988 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149836424154 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546628404312 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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