Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Criminal activity nowadays is increasing at an alarming rate. Some people believe that the ultimate way to punish criminals is the death penalty while others negate this notion by stating that it is not the best punishment for every crime. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and then explain why I agree with the aforementioned statement.
To begin with, capital punishment is unnecessary for society. A single wrong decision of the judiciary can lead to the death of an innocent person. Moreover, we, as humans have no right to kill other humans, without giving them a second chance to improve their behavior or bring a change in their lives. As an illustration, Bollywood actor, Sanjay Dutt, who was sent to prison for 10 years, was released from prison on terms of good behavior such as giving motivational speech daily on radio and engaging in various activities of the lock-up. Therefore, this shows that even people committing heinous crimes deserve a second chance to become better individuals in life.
On the other hand, the death penalty for serious crimes such as rape or murder is considered an effective deterrent. The prominent way to give a reality check to criminals is by showing the consequences of their actions. For instance, terrorism in Saudi Arabia is controlled by giving death penalties to individuals part of terrorist organizations. As a result, there is a wave of fear among the citizens, who are even leaning towards such detrimental acts. Furthermore, a decrease in the number of prisoners due to such harsh punishments can ultimately result in a reduction of budget allocated for prison management. Hence, these funds can be better utilized for the welfare of society.
In conclusion, though capital punishment sounds optimum for perilous crimes, it is always preferable to find alternatives for bringing a difference in the attitude of individuals involved in such activity. Thus, I totally agree with this notion that execution is not always a fair means of judgment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09939759036 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86002342582 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3409297009 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201928462353 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606009858349 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534753072662 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118255316684 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041878765087 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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