Some people believe that cities are not the right place for the growth of the children rather they should live in villages.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Some people believe that cities are not the right place for the growth of the children rather they should live in villages.
Do you agree or disagree?

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Living in cities are totally different than living in villages. We believe that people who live in villages have alternative concepts towards life. As their most concenteration only on farms and animals. As there are not enough engaged with life's progress outside. While citizens who continue their life in the city. We find them following the technology in all matters. As they are open. And they are well educated. Therefore, i disagree with statement.

So, Human who spend their life in cities, they have more opprtunities to live openly. In adition, familes can not find difficulties to choose for right school to make their children study in it. For example, schools in cities are available everywhere. By this way, children have choices to continue one's education wherever they want. To be more specific, schools function high techniques in teaching to ensure children can obtain proper education. So that, they may grow professionally. Furthermore, in cities, there are a lot of hospitals exist in it. Where people will be able to get their treatment. As it is very easy to have a hospital near them. Therefore, there are several jobs vacancies there.

On the contrary, villages do not have that many hosiptals, clinics, and schools to take care of their health and education as well. For example, villagers have limited jobs in the village. They could find it so complicated in finding such facilities to make their life easily. Notable, that they suffer from these restrictions of this issue. Therefore, families have more chances to remain their children's future in safe

To sum up, people in cities have enormous of opportuinties to get proper education and treatment as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ncenteration only on farms and animals. As there are not enough engaged with lifes...
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...gh engaged with lifes progress outside. While citizens who continue their life in the...
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...ollowing the technology in all matters. As they are open. And they are well educat...
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... way, children have choices to continue ones education wherever they want. To be mor...
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...ls function high techniques in teaching to ensure children can obtain proper education. ...
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...le will be able to get their treatment. As it is very easy to have a hospital near...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, on the contrary, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11870503597 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73661584825 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9799326786 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2916666667 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5833333333 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192409307845 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538337253181 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493451679614 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114864462296 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394396458885 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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